poetsofpeabody

On a dead body....literally.

2008-01-17T22:38:00.001-05:00

Coagulated love

I am so very alone here tonight.
Must suppress any unnatural urge.
My morbid curiosity, a blight.
Tired of work, my guilt begins to purge.

Finished my work with anticipation.
In the freezer lies my object of pain,
and yet it brings me such adoration.
A trip to hell on a one way train.

My morals go right out the window.
I deserve this minute fidelity.
Cold to the touch...I reap what I sow.
This for certain is a delicacy,
And what's best is she can't even say no.

Her silky clumped hair and twisted smile.
Brings me an endless joy from the unlife.
I feel like i've brought this girl down the aisle.
Her tenderness reminds me of my wife.

My pleasure finally comes to an end.
Object 3201, a real pleaser.
A real live woman could never contend.
She's a little warm, back into the freezer.

At my awful house where I am alone,
anger seething.
My wife is asleep, an unworthy clone,
just a teasing.
In our garden I grab a heavy stone,
my heart's grieving.
You see my wife, I do not life her tone,
She's still breathing.

-Your Buddy

winter poem

2008-01-17T22:37:00.000-05:00

Scriblings at 4:47

The bed's cold
The bed is always cold.
The bed has always been cold for an eternity.

Winter is cold
Winter is alway's cold
No matter what year, there's always winter.
The bed's cold,
the heating blanket isn't enough

life's cold.
life is unusually cold.
a liquid nitrogen of cold.
Ready to shatter into a million snowflakes.
Snowflakes are underestimated.
the bed's cold.
The are nothing one at a time,
but together they kill.
One snowflake can turn into an avalanche.

The bed's cold, life's cold.
The poor bums outside, fighting snowflakes
one at a time.
Both their life and bed's cold.
The cement is frigid.
Hopelessness is futile, it won't get you warm.
Only liquid fire to fight with,
and unlit cigars, no lights. Just a drop of liquid fire.

One snowflake into an avalanche,
life's cold,
bed's cold,
life's frigid.
Learn to hibernate through winters, or starve.
When things are summery.
Star collecting acorns....
Pessimism is best, your always prepared of winter.

The bed's cold.
The bed was cold, now it's emotionally chilly.
The winter has just started.
It will indulge it's hungry appetite for bum children and emotionally chillybeds.
an ongoing monster

The winter eats you. The winter inside feed's itself.
Late nights and cold beds shouldn't mix,....oil and water.
However hopelessly cold beds make good poetry.
Cold beds make frigid poetry, a winter of words,
and blankets aren't enough.

-Your Buddy

Writing style inspired by the j beck. Subject matter inspired by Thoma's Blake

To Winter
By Thomas Blake

O Winter! bar thine adamantine doors:
The north is thine; there hast thou built they
dark
Deep-founded Habitation. Shake not thy roofs,
Nor bend thy pillars with thine iron car.
He hears me not, but o'er the yawning deep
Rides heave; his storms are unchain'd, sheathed
In ribbed steel; I dare not lift mine eyes,
For he hath rear'd his sceptre o'er the world.

Lo! now the direful monster, whose skin clings
To his strong bones, strides o'er the groaning
Rocks:
He withers all in silence, and his hand
Unclothes the earth, and freezes up frail lie.

Faker

2008-01-10T19:47:00.000-05:00

Your mouth runs of
gossip and ignorance.
Don't you realize
you've changed?
Do you want a treat
for creating deceit in
our friendship that's sweet?
Feel the heat, you make me
so mad and I can't keep my seat
I just gotta beat, beat something
or tweet, squeeze something so tight
until the breath dies and I've saved
the world from lies, lies you comprise.
Yeh, go ahead, roll your eyes,
but you know deep inside that it's
true.

Me to a "friend"

Sun dried Kisses

2008-01-08T23:46:00.001-05:00

I crush these oranges
upon transparent paper
with rose petals marinated
in perfumed water...
I leave it out to dry.

I love the ability to take
something and make it stay
forever...

You kiss my lips and I
leave them to dry.
Sun dried kisses
fade...

Liar

2008-01-07T16:12:00.000-05:00

The ticking of my clock is the only noise I hear.
Is this all there is to my life?
Deceptions, confessions, corrections...
Now I hear pitters.. patters, patterns swirling
through like they always do. Momentum of
the heart still churning, yearning for some kind
actions by a human soul to shed some feelings to fill
the hole, a hole not deep but needs some completion.
It comes back to this, it always does. You care
or you don't, but don't lie to the face that's always
been honest to you. Don't lie, don't feed it bullshit
like you do with the rest of the world. Be true, it's you.
Come on, now do. Don't think it through.
Pick up your life and find anew. You always knew
you'd find a view.
You care or you don't, but don't lie to you.

to me...from me

Piss

2008-01-06T23:34:00.000-05:00

Oh, the missing and
the kissing and
the beautiful reminiscing
of reunited lovers!

And everyone is happy, but
I must say I feel crappy and
the moment of the bliss
makes me PISS.

from me to a guy.... yes, I'm venting... what better way to do it, than through poetry?

Paper Clip

2008-01-06T23:21:00.000-05:00

Our relationship
Is like a paper clip
bending back and forth
until it gets agitated
and hot and I have to
break
off...

To a guy from me...

Final Project: Evidence

2008-01-02T14:31:00.000-05:00

The Barber shop

My ‘fro was ridiculously awesome.
Nine inches off my ridiculous head.
Mom thinks its too black, hood, and tiresome.
Way too far back to the 80s junction.

It must be cut she says in her tone.
Might as well stab me right through my tired heart,
Its not like I’m rockin braids or some chrome.
Not a gangsta, She won’t leave me alone.

I call my pops with his trip whipped hooptey.
I’m minutes from losing my identity.
Was expecting dad to say something tryin’.
Off to the cultural guillotine I should be cryin.

there is a thick musty spell of burnt hair,
Just a room full of humid tired bones.
People waiting patiently gasping air.
A child is astonished but it’s fair.

The barbers work with uncanny precision,
One profession where misses are deadly.
Hopefully the razor won’t be God’s decision.
I wonder if they have emergency provisions.

With a few passes of the fast razor.
My fro has passed onto the floor.
Now I’ve become a race traitor.
Time to go rob some banks and make myself greater.

Ode to an Urn in the closet

It's too bad you had to leave us so soon.
You had a lot ahead of you but now,
your in our closet, right next to the broom.
You should have dodged that bus but no....kapow.
You were too busy on your dumb ipod.
Brain too busy with practice, work and school.
So you were busted onto the thirsty sod.
So now you have plenty of time on your hands.
Stingy bastard have fun on celestial organs abroad.

Well…it’s no where near as bad as I thought.
Everything seems a little too sterile here.
The people are too nice like they are bought.
Something is wrong everything is too clear.
An uncomfortable warmth comes upon me.
Followed by a burning inferno of pain.
OMFG! I’m in hell please let me free!
Satan smiles at me and I’m a little sad,
But after what I’ve been through this isn’t so bad.

We’re in trouble

O no why did you spill that on the floor.
She just waxed it you know? Your craziness.
Sneak in the kitchen you are a food hoar.
Punched in the stomach your brain will be hazy.

Why did you write your teacher that dummy?
You must like to stay in your bed all day.
Well I don’t really care its your tummy.
Sneak in the kitchen tonight if you may.

I can’t believe I got into a fight.
Those stupid bullies just won’t let me be.
Bonnie won’t care, she will punish on sight.
I might have to try to dig myself free.

I just woke up and she wants me to clean.
My bed is not made, but why do I care.
Just wait of my wash cloth for me to ream.
Its just morning and I’m all out of steam.

I got caught playing games yesterday night.
I had thought she turned out all of her lights.
Nope, she was awake watching with a sight.
And now I am alone and in a fright.

I’m a bit lonely what a trouble maker.
He’s always in bed, something he must said.
He lied didn’t deny, try to fake her.
She saw through the disguise and now he’s in bed.

Judgement Life Death and Sentence (named by Camille P.)

I don’t like her very much she’s trouble.
Don’t listen to me, it’s not my feelings.
But when you get screwed don’t come reeling.
She likes both you and your stupid stubble.
Sirens going off, warning signs double.
Puppy love I don’t know what your seeing,
Few months, you’ll see, your heart will be bleeding.
Your are going to date that piece of rubble.
Nothing is sacred now a days, for shame.
I’ll go to your brothers and make some bets.
She’ll dump your ass and you’ll be blind, deaf, lame,
While I’ll be in the money and don’t you forget,
I’m right about everything it’s all the same.
Make your own mistakes, your bros are in debt!

We Stroll down a problem free life each day.
Relations never sour with your soul mate.
Gazing into glowin’ eyes you speak away,
Of true passionate love that by far is great.
Seems too swell to be true, I’m positive;
But we are an embodiment of love.
Might as well live the life we wanna live.
Space can’t get in our way we’ll push and shove-
Past our rents and onto the lonely train.
Into a week long embrace that soon ends,
But we know true love will maintain.
An angel in flesh….truly a god send.
I’ve never been happier in my whole life.
I’m going to ask this lady to be my wife.

She tells me that a ticket I don’t need.
Fantastic news you are coming down town?
She is still born baby silent….I frown.
She talks in a teary voice,”we can’t succeed.”
In this beautiful relation she concedes.
I feel blind, deaf, dumb, dead and beaten down.
I say everything’s fine….The word resounds.
“There’s been someone else” my heart starts to bleed.
All this time I’ve been counting off the days.
She says he’s a placeholder next to her-
In bed. She said she wanted to be true.
I squirm, this is all a bad dream, she says-
She wants to still see me. Something I dread.
She whispers she’s sorry and I love you.

Hum, you can’t be serious how is she right.
Everything seemed perfect, it was torture.
You and Bee were ridiculously tight.
Mom kept saying that I wasn’t for her,
But I grit my teeth and I just deny.
I will not tell mom nor will I comply
…..she already knows she’s a secret agent spy
I havn’t told anyone she sees through the lie.
Silently humble her vampiristic
Elation of my troubled misery
I feel a need for emotional difilbrilation
Why would such trouble come to be.
At the end of the day mommy is right.
Only few days did I cry through the night

Ya Got it?

What ever you do deny, deny, deny.
Into ridiculous hours we stayed late.
Don’t tell mom and don’t comply

She already know’ she’s a secret agent spy.
If you give too many details you will be sedate.
What ever you do deny, deny, deny.

You were not eating candy it’s not a lie
Just remember the truth that you are to state
Don’t tell mom and don’t comply.

You didn’t play stupid games you didn’t even try
Act as smooth as possible she knows your traits.
What ever you do deny, deny, deny.

She might make up things and she will try.
She’s a mental extortionist don’t add nothing to your slate.
Don’t tell mom and don’t comply.

We had a good time our rooms now a sty.
Do good in school so we can have another date
What ever you do, deny, deny ,deny.
Don’t tell Mom and don’t comply

Accomplice

Who would make me write about my mother,
Is there anyone actually tougher?
Dr. Robbins of course.
Her hand she will force.
Bets on who’s mentally tougher.

We’re pretty much screwed in the long run,
We’re not safe if we’re under the sun.
We’ll be buried alive.
Our oxygen depreived.
Or we could be shot from a gun.

But I heard iron maidens are great
Who knows what is exactly at stake?
Our blood will splatter.
Bones likely to shatter.
We’re in a potentially painful check mate

Not saying its all your fault.
Just hoping walls you can vault.
Cause I know mom can.
With bags filled with san’.
We may need plan, this is the default.

Here in lies evidence undeniable.
Are your body guards even reliable.
I’m saying beware.
Your in for a scare.
who knows..........................................

Final project: Liasons, Lost and Found

2007-12-20T00:26:00.000-05:00

What else is “end” for, but to signal the end?
Villanelle

What else is “end” for, but to signal the end
Of an often-sought six-letter word:
A race to the finish of “friend”?

The spelling on which I have grown to depend
Is seen, yes, but seldom heard.
What else is “end” for, but to signal the end?

“I before E…” Do the letters contend?
Wouldn’t taking turns be preferred
In a race to the finish of “friend”?

“Two vowels, both alike in dignity…”
But we’re forced to pretend in an ending no less than absurd!
What else is “end” for, but to signal the end?

Is it fair that E is left to append
While I gets to take lucky third
In a race to the finish of “friend”?

And what if E’s me, to the gallows condemned –
Rejected, deserted, deferred?
What else is “end” for, but to signal the end
In a race to the finish of “friend”?

-------

If words be woven by the somber soul
Sonnet

If words be woven by the somber soul,
Then thou hast caught me in thy honest net.
For with such writings I have been made whole –
Too choked to swim away, mine eyes are wet.
If words be formed like dewdrops on a vine,
Which overnight collect in glist’ning pools,
Then yours art such that do with sunlight shine
As brightly as the earth’s most precious jewels.
My breath was stifled with a broken flow
When misty eyes afforded second glance,
For as dear Ashley read another go,
We laughed until we almost crapped our pants.

I’m sure you’ll make the perfect stupid wife:
Hell if I’ll be there, but have a splendid life!

-------

The eavesdrop
Diebhidhe

Watching, waiting for the sound,
Hearing ears and eyes abound.
Quiet sobs ‘scape from your lips—
Drips of which he vilely sips.

-------

You cannot hear my sleepless cries
Ballade/Aubade

The ceiling here is not my own,
But, barren, presses dark as night.
The corner where the glow-smile shone
No longer sheds that soothing light,
But madly scowls— teeth bone white.
And underneath these starless skies?
A tear-trail that my thoughts ignite.
You cannot hear my sleepless cries.

The lines denoting how I’d grown,
A sticker marking each new height;
The drawings on the telephone;
The butterflies and paper kite…
All distant mem’ries now tonight
For aqueous and weary eyes—
For fists that clench the covers tight.
You cannot hear my sleepless cries.

And Mommy lying there alone,
Where battered dreams and ease unite
On perfect pillows— sheets a clone
Of ones that sweethearts do invite…
It isn’t just another fight.
Don’t try to hush me with your lies.
No, this time it won’t be alright.
You cannot hear my sleepless cries.

Now daylight breaking, blazing bright—
No time to say all my goodbyes.
Oh, I am sickened by the sight!
You cannot hear my sleepless cries.

-------

An attempt
Blazon

I miss the salt and pepper fringe that used to crown your head,
The grays of which—all buried now— are reddish-brown instead.
Your eyes that once were sunny skies seem overcast these days.
The hedge above your lips has grown in some… nonstandard ways.
You passed your diet training, but I rather liked the fat.
What good is poking fun now, when there’s nothing left to pat?
And for God’s sake, will you throw away those lumps that you call shoes?
Or next time I come visit, you’ll be meeting my tattoos!

-------

Willow
Crystalline

Green tears suspended from a limb;
Has beauty ever seemed so grim?

-------

10 Russell Road
Exploring rhetoric

The carpets are covered with drip-stains.
The bookshelves are layered with dust.
The back stairs are sprinkled with crumb-trains,
The bathrooms embroidered with rust.

The bedrooms are crowded with pictures,
And none of them signify much.
The couches and tables are mixtures
Of memories that he would clutch.

My daddy’s alone in this household,
My daddy who rants on the phone,
My daddy who opens his billfold…
My daddy is simply alone.

-------

My quiet spot
Triolet

The figures passing do not know
I watch them from my quiet spot.
My quiet eyes look down below.
The figures passing do not know.
They press on, trudging through the snow.
But I am quiet, lost in thought.
The figures passing do not know.
I watch them from my quiet spot.

-------

release
Double Lento

conflicting signals from the brain
restricting higher judgment
inflicting words of wild disdain
addicting: no confinement
expecting all to fix itself
projecting hopes, deflated
correcting errors— (ordered shelf)
respecting’s overrated
believing every uttered word
deceiving motivation
perceiving progress; naught occurred
achieving isolation
it just keeps coming out like this
pit helplessly against him
spit callously like drool or piss
shit out with no retention

-------

Fisher on the quay
Terza Rima

Two gentle eyes peer down from overhead.
“It’s you,” I think, and dare to breathe once more.
The covers sink as limbs adjoin the bed.

They sink, exhaling air from out each pore
And emanate into the darkened space,
Expanding, banding, drifting to the floor.

A hand appearing on my moistened face
Surveys the damage of its swollen streams
With tenderness and unassuming grace.

It leads me, then, into the land of dreams,
Where worries wash away into the sea;
Where ardency is always as it seems;

Where you reside, collecting all debris
Upon the shore of my unburdened thought:
The rescuer— my guardian esprit.

“If ever your poor heart is overwrought
With troubles that reach past the sea and spray,
Remember, then, the moment you were caught

By this man, your dear fisher on the quay.”
Awakening, I find you by my side,
Asleep beneath the drowsy shadows’ sway,

And suddenly, with shutters open wide,
I weep for wonder, filled with pride.

some stuff

2007-12-14T03:47:00.000-05:00

Hey there i'm posting the city paper's annual poetry winners

3rd place

Untitled
By John Mazur

now that we have television.
we won't have to talk anymore

2nd place

Business loafers
by Batworth

Were we ever to begin quenching
Our thirst for spirit, released from
The echoic trip of relentless tomorrows.
Abducted by the unstressed highballers,
Kneeling in green leafies...
Our apathy would be cauterized. Still
Eyeworms bleed from catatonia's
Only capsized shelter dwelling.
A pagoda inflamed with the
Accouterments du jour:

Bellyphones, buisness loafers, outfits
To outwit the nattiest; and we are to
Traverse another scorched soulscape
With watery hearts.

1st place

Dusk Arrangement
By Hastings Hensel

"The eye is burning, forms are burning, eye-consciousness is burning"- The Buddha
"Some say in ice." -Frost

Everything is burning; the ends of our cigarettes,
the charcoal-colored robins, the freckled sunlight
splotched and split like eggshell on the lawn.
Burning: the flamed hush of western pinks,
voices like wildfires in the city's under-story-
lawn mowers, buzz saws, cars at the far edge
of the ear's periphery. Burning: the top halves
of other houses, fenced in for the eye, the birch shadows like twisting runes, the burning glow
of Bradford pears sparked early like suburban stars.

Or melting: the ice cubes in our drink like stars,
the shade by the clothesline, the heel-print moon
in the sand-colored sky. Melting: box fan clicking
in the window, sentence of cloud, the cold ring
on the cocktail napkin. Melting: sky of stillness,
birdsong, dog-bark, ceaseless thrum of traffic.
Discuss

O and i found the comedian that Emma reminded me of. So this is his song "superheroes."

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vo6hhEFHn40

The Pied Piper of Hamelin

2007-12-06T16:08:00.000-05:00

As promised, here are the links to the claymation of Robert Browning's "The Pied Piper of Hamelin." It's pretty dark, so don't watch it before bed unless you like that sort of thing. The whole video is just under 30 minutes. Oh yeah, and the narrator is amazing!

Part I
Part II
Part III

There is much dispute over what actually may have happened with the children, but historians do believe that the story is based in truth. (The rats may have been added in later, however.)

Dual response

2007-11-15T22:54:00.001-05:00

Hi guys! The following is my response to "Ode on a Grecian Urn"... as well as "Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird." It just happened to work out that way. I'm not going to write a blurb! So if you're confused as to how this ties in with themes in the ode, feel free to comment and I'll get back to you.

Mommy’s friends

I
A repertoire of song–
Innate, melodious,
And clear:
It can be learned by human ears,
But never reproduced.

II
A bird on the nose
Is worth two in the hand.

III
Every morning,
When the sky is still deep blue,
Her hands sift seed
Upon sod.

She knows that they will come.

Poetry from outside the class

2007-11-13T19:24:00.000-05:00

I just wanted to get your opinions on these... these are poems I've been having fun with outside of class.

R. and J.

In a town called Verona two households feud.
Not long into the fight the Prince did intrude,
“If anyone else decides blood should be shed,
Then he is awaiting his own deathbed!”

Later that night, a party, Romeo goes to.
He met Juliet and they said, “I love you.”
The next day the two became one.
And Mercutio and Tybalt were over…done.

Plans to marry Paris were all set.
But her parents did not know her little secret.
Since Romeo killed Tybalt he had to leave.
All Juliet did was grieve, grieve, grieve!

Tuesday morn Juliet goes to Friar Laurence.
She thought he could get her out of the non-sense.
He gave her a sleeping potion to take at night,
And she’d look so dead it’d give the nurse a fright.

The next morning Juliet was found “dead”.
Poor ‘ol Paris would not get wed.
Romeo came as soon as he could,
But he killed himself for he misunderstood.

Juliet wakes up a second later,
And in walks Friar, the instigator.
He asks her to come with him,
But instead she did herself in.

Lost Love

I drank your poison of love one day

And fell into a deep trance of ecstasy.

You made me feel like I was on a cloud;

To be your girlfriend, I was so proud.

They pumped my stomach; our love is at loss

My emotions feel like a game of toss.

To see that light, how the glitter fades;

It seems our relationship went down cascades.

But you wanted too much, my whole heart

When all I could give you was just a part.

I feel like this next poem was inspired by another poem.. but I don't know what it was... it was so long ago.

Nothing good to listen to

An American Idol, thats who I look for

In the poop section of my local record store

Ruben or Clay, oh which should I pick?

Its like choosing which puddle of vomit to lick

When I want something even more fruity and fake

I look up 'N' for N'Sync or 'T' for Timberlake.

So many skills Justins making a buck at

Does he rap? Does he sing?

He doesn't know what to suck at.

This is my favorite:

Litmus

What is litmus?

Why, it is me.

I am nothing but bland,

Ordinary.

Malcontents are thrown my way

And I react like fire.

Subsidence eventually occurs

Within my citric soul.

And I become blue.

Please tell me what you think! I have more to come...

buddy's response poem

2007-11-13T09:39:00.000-05:00

Ode on a Sequenza

2007-11-10T22:30:00.000-05:00

Pumping, it's pumping and living with breath
Human voice, saxophone,....human saxophone
Stable and unstable begin to merge
Sweet, soft, light, no conflict is desired
Harsh, grotesque growl is what most often is
Is this beauty disguised or redefined?

The buzz outside is one, the buzz within
Repeated notes, repeated thoughts, repeat
An internal insanity now is
Outside, cannot be, will not be stopped
By the imposing order, the structure
The structure is instability

A glimpse, a blink, a small part in time
So perfect, it becomes imperfection
It's living, breathing. Inhale and feel it
Touch it, live it, you are, there is no choice
Everywhere, usless attempt to escape
No characters trapped....unbound...

It exists before we can hear the sound
Living past the last note...what is the last?
Silence is, was, interwoven, tangled
Light pushes dark, dark-light, universal
Trying to catch up, just falling behind
Fourteen minutes of infinity...

Another response poem

2007-11-08T16:34:00.000-05:00

Hello Poets --
I thought we would see what happened if we all responded to one poem. The poem I've picked is John Keats's "Ode on a Grecian Urn" http://www.bartleby.com/101/625.html.
Make sure you have a dyad in mind as your write your response -- I suspect everyone will respond in his or her own special way. Hint: if you really want to understand the poem well, read it out loud -- preferably with other people around. Try to imagine who is speaking and to whom that person is speaking.
I will have all of your poems back to you on Tuesday.

2007-11-07T02:10:00.000-05:00

greetings everyone,
i figured i would post the burns poem and my response to get some feedback since time ran out during class. so here they are...

A Red, Red Rose
by Robert Burns

My luve is like a red, red rose,
That's newly sprung in June:
My luve is like the melodie,
That's sweetly play'd in tune.
As fair art thou, my bonie lass,
So deep in luve am I,
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a' the seas gang dry.

Till a' the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi' the sun!
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o' life shall run.
And fare-thee-weel, my only luve,
And fare-thee-weel a while!
And I will come again, my luve,
Tho' it were ten-thousand mile.

Ten Thousand Miles
by me

Behind me lies that winding road,
Which I have known too well.
My feet remember every step,
And snare by which I fell.
Ten thousand miles, I marked the length,
But still I stand, alone.
The Winter chill surrounds me now,
That hopeful Spring has flown.
And so the petals, faded, fall
From this, our wilted love.
You said "a while" but this is not
What I was thinking of.

To Win, Be Thin

2007-11-06T18:26:00.000-05:00

Here's what I read in class today:

In response to: Fat is not a Fairy Tale by Jane Yolen (page 101)

To be pretty is to be blonde and thin.

At least that’s what they show on the TV

Mirrors will always say that you can’t win.

Dark California girls will tan their skin.

You exercise your butt off to lose weight.

To be pretty is to be blonde and thin.

You think that guys might notice you again

If you eat just one meal a day and run.

Mirrors will always say that you can’t win.

You lost some weight and bat your eyes at men.

A shame they did not notice you last year.

To be pretty is to be blonde and thin.

You look good and you show it by your grin

Sporting the clothes you always wanted to.

Mirrors will always say that you can’t win.

Too bad no one could see you’re great within.

I guess hard work does pay off in the end.

To be pretty is to be blonde and thin.

Mirrors will always say that you can’t win.

Ps: I wrote a new AUBADE for my poetry project collection and I set it to MUSIC!!!

...Flowers and Poetry Class...

2007-11-06T16:42:00.001-05:00

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I really love this poetry class
Can we please have it next semester too??????????????

Lilacs are purple
Tulips are pink
I'll keep on bugging you
'Cause we pre-register next week!

The End.

Music Theory Poem

2007-11-06T12:21:00.000-05:00

I did my response poem based on Walt Whitman's "When I Heard the Learn'd Astronomer"

When I Heard the Learn'd Astronomer

When I heard the learn'd astonomer,
When the proofs, the figures, were ranged in columns before me,
when I was shown the charts and diagrams, to add, divide, and measure them,
When I sitting heard the astronomer where he lectured with much applause in the lecture-room,
How soon unaccountable I became tried and sick,
Till rising and gliding out I wandered off by myself,
In the mystial moist night-air, and from time to time,
Looked up in perfect silence at the stars.

Now for my poem:

When I Heard the Learn'd Music Theorist

When I heard the learn'd music theorist,
When the cadences and set classes were in columns before me,
When I was told about modulations, muical forms and formulas to invent a piece,
When I sitting heard the music theorist where he lectures with a sense of accomplishment and self-pride,
How soon frustrated I grew tired and sick,
Till humming a tune to myself,
A simple melody, untouched by formula and organically grown
Realizing what was beauty.

Response Poem

2007-11-05T17:51:00.000-05:00

Hey yall.

I did a response poem also. Here is the poem I responded to (you will hear my poem tomorrow in class hopefully):

Fat is not a Fairy Tale by Jane Yolen

I am thinking of a fairy tale,
Cinder Elephant,
Sleeping Tubby,
Snow Weight,
where the princess is not
anorexic, wasp-waisted;
flinging herself down the stairs.

I am thinking of a fairy tale,
Hansel and Great,
Repoundsel,
Bounty and the Beast,
where the beauty
has a pillowed breast,
and fingers plump as sausage.

I am thinking of a fairy tale
that is not yet written,
for a teller not yet born,
for a listerner not yet conceived,
for a world not yet won,
where everything round is good:
the sun, wheels, cookies, and the princess.

sooooo... hopefully you will hear the response tomorrow. My response poem title is " To win, be Thin"

Optional homework :>

2007-11-05T00:46:00.000-05:00

Hey guys. I have decided to take Dr. Robbins' suggestion and write my response poem to Sylvia Plath's "Daddy." It is SO GOOD! If you want to get a head start understanding where I'm coming from this week:

Daddy, by Sylvia Plath

You do not do, you do not do
Any more, black shoe
In which I have lived like a foot
For thirty years, poor and white,
Barely daring to breathe or Achoo.

Daddy, I have had to kill you.
You died before I had time--
Marble-heavy, a bag full of God,
Ghastly statue with one gray toe
Big as a Frisco seal

And a head in the freakish Atlantic
Where it pours bean green over blue
In the waters off beautiful Nauset.
I used to pray to recover you.
Ach, du.

In the German tongue, in the Polish town
Scraped flat by the roller
Of wars, wars, wars.
But the name of the town is common.
My Polack friend

Says there are a dozen or two.
So I never could tell where you
Put your foot, your root,
I never could talk to you.
The tongue stuck in my jaw.

It stuck in a barb wire snare.
Ich, ich, ich, ich,
I could hardly speak.
I thought every German was you.
And the language obscene

An engine, an engine
Chuffing me off like a Jew.
A Jew to Dachau, Auschwitz, Belsen.
I began to talk like a Jew.
I think I may well be a Jew.

The snows of the Tyrol, the clear beer of Vienna
Are not very pure or true.
With my gipsy ancestress and my weird luck
And my Taroc pack and my Taroc pack
I may be a bit of a Jew.

I have always been scared of you,
With your Luftwaffe, your gobbledygoo.
And your neat mustache
And your Aryan eye, bright blue.
Panzer-man, panzer-man, O You--

Not God but a swastika
So black no sky could squeak through.
Every woman adores a Fascist,
The boot in the face, the brute
Brute heart of a brute like you.

You stand at the blackboard, daddy,
In the picture I have of you,
A cleft in your chin instead of your foot
But no less a devil for that, no not
Any less the black man who

Bit my pretty red heart in two.
I was ten when they buried you.
At twenty I tried to die
And get back, back, back to you.
I thought even the bones would do.

But they pulled me out of the sack,
And they stuck me together with glue.
And then I knew what to do.
I made a model of you,
A man in black with a Meinkampf look

And a love of the rack and the screw.
And I said I do, I do.
So daddy, I'm finally through.
The black telephone's off at the root,
The voices just can't worm through.

If I've killed one man, I've killed two--
The vampire who said he was you
And drank my blood for a year,
Seven years, if you want to know.
Daddy, you can lie back now.

There's a stake in your fat black heart
And the villagers never liked you.
They are dancing and stamping on you.
They always knew it was you.
Daddy, daddy, you bastard, I'm through.

And here is a Wikipedia article about the poem. It helps clarify some things.

Teddy Bear (Blazon)

2007-11-04T23:38:00.001-05:00

Your big round eyes

With a pair of big fluffy ears,

Your cute soft palms

And the puffy tummy.

All these cuteness of you,

Comfort me through sadness,

Walk me through loneliness,

How is it ever possible to give you up?

When I want to tell a secret,

You sit there still,

Looking at me straight.

When I want to sing a song,

You sit there still,

Listening to me sing.

I know you are nothing but a bear,

A toy bear who shares feelings with me.

Mom said a toy can never live,

But deep in my heart,

I believe

Teddy,

You are always my best friend.

Fresh Air

2007-11-04T20:24:00.000-05:00

The breeze whispers children's giggles into my ear
Strokes my hair and kisses my face.
With deep gaze into each others eyes,
We understand each other without a word.
You're an angel from afar.
The sun outlines your figure with a glistening glow.
It shines on your hair giving you dark golden highlights.
You take off your coat and roll up your sleeves.
You are getting warm.
When I'm in the swing, the pressure of your hand on my back
feels so nice and the bustling of bees in the bushes and the chirping of birds become so loud
and I just want to hold onto this moment for forever.
But alas, the day comes to an end.
I breathe in the crisp ambiance of the happy day.
This leaves me with a tingling feeling with my whole being.
Fresh air renewed my soul.

Preface to the Fall of Daltarus

2007-11-01T23:55:00.000-04:00

So here is my "blurb" as promised. I was thinking of using this simply as a introduction and preface to what will be my epic poem, telling the tale of this battle. Its basic purpose is simply to set the stage, and inform the reader of the events that lead to this point.

***

The 5th century, the Age of Nations:
The world of Tandara is inhabited by eleven separate nations. There has been a state of unrest since the appearance of a magical relic known as the Bracer of Shadows, a weapon that granted the bearer immense physical power. The bracer feeds off of the rage and anger of its host, which can then activate a state called the 'shadow phase' which can border upon invincibility. Unfortunately, this state quickly saps the bearer's willpower gradually causing him to lose his mind and become a slave to the magic of the Bracer. Essentially this weapon was created to wreak mass havoc upon the world of men by praying upon their natural pride and lust for power. With this great power loose in the world, it was not long before all of Tandara was swept up in a massive war. A was that became known as the War for Raelia, for it was the nation of Raelia that currently possessed the Bracer. This nation's ruler, Lord Arion would lead his forces along with those of his allies, Galdaria, and the Tribe of the Yellow Ax, into battle against all eight of the other nations, led by Lord Varcos of Krondar. Each of these nations entered the war with their own motives, but ultimately they all desired that the Bracer be removed from Raelian hands.

Thanks to the efforts of his father, the previous lord, who journeyed to the Far Side of the world to gain answers concerning the Bracer, Arion bears it into battle knowing full well how to destroy it. The Bracer can only be destroyed by the blade of the one who wears it, but in doing this, he will perish. So Arion now struggles with his own desires for what he believes to be the power to protect his people. Varcos also wrestles with his own thoughts as to whether or not he is right to destroy Raelia in his quest for justice and peace, for his mind has been heavily swayed by the deceptions of Father Sartanus of the Clan, who is in league with the mystical creators of the Bracer and therefore is also bent on the destruction of humankind.

As it stands, the forces of the Krondar-led Alliance stand ready to lay siege to the Raelian capital city of Daltarus, wherein Arion prepares both his Raelians and the Tribesmen who, being heavily outnumbered, can only hope to hold out long enough for the reinforcements of the Galdarian navy to arrive.

***

If you have any questions, just ask, I'll be happy to answer, and comments/criticisms are of course more than welcome. I'd like to see if this is enough to inform and audience of what's going on without confusing them.

Poem

2007-11-01T16:08:00.000-04:00

my mail

keeps evolving and there is more
of it.
in the old days
many letters were from ladies,
often with photos.
I'd tell them to come visit
and I met them at the airport
and drove them
home.
then there was drinking and
sex.
most stayed two or three days,
then left.

there were also letters from
men in jail, some as far away as
Australia.
I answered these letters.
there were also letters from
poets, known and
unknown.
then there were a few mental
cases.
I answered these as well.
the problem was that they all
wanted continual
response,
a life-long correspondence.
when I would inform them
that this couldn't be done
I received some irrational
and foul responses
in return.

I found myself writing dozens
of letters a
month.
and my intention
as a writer had not been to
correspond with
any and
all.

I finally gave up
babying my
mailbox.

I read my mail but in
90 percent of the cases
I didn't
respond.

I heard a story about
Faulkner.
when he got a letter
he held it up to the
light.
if he didn't see a check
in there
he threw it away
unopened.

I read my mail
then threw it
away.

now much of my mail
is from college
professors.
some of them are
precise and pleasant
enough
but few are worthy
of response.

and there are a couple of
self-published books of poetry
a week,
few worthy of
response.

the ladies and the
convicts and the madmen
have dropped
away.

I still get letters from
people who announce they will
soon be in town to
"drink 8 or ten beers" with
me ...

my job
as a writer
is to write.
I am not a counselor
nor an entertainer,
nor am I interested in
reading books of
poesy
or bedding down
or giving blurbs
or recommending unsung
so-called geniuses
to my
publisher.

when I was an unknown
writer
I sent my work
directly to the magazines
and the publishers,
never with a cover
letter,
and I never knocked on
anybody's
door
and I never read my
work to my wives or
my girlfriends
or anybody.

when you are in a prize fight
you climb into the
ring,
you do it where it is
done.
and it's not done at
literary parties or by
writing Burroughs or
Mailer
or Ferlinghetti.

you sit down at your
machine
and fire it into the
unknown,
and if you don't have
a machine
you write it on the
walls or on the edges
of newspapers.
and you'll keep doing
it,
doing it,
and if you've got
it,
the guts and the
laughter and the manner
of saying it
you'll finally come
through.
forget everything
else.

the gods are good,
they only want to
make sure.

Charles Bukowski (1971), from Bone Palace Ballet: New Poems (1997)

Poets of Peabody Blog

2007-11-01T16:03:00.001-04:00

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